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Some call me, 'Prince of the Dark,'
Other call me the, 'Master of Hell.'
I trade favors for souls,
And I leave my damned mark;
I need not ring the Bell.

Power I have given a hundred men,
Love I have given to others.
I always destroy those I 'Help,'
But only after I tear it away from them,
Or slaughter their lovers.

But how and why, you demand.
Some have even blamed me for their sin.
My name is Lucifel the Fallen One.
I was 'Fated' to this by my Kin;
Yes, my Fall had long been planned.

I was once a great Saint,
Pure and innocent, untouched by hate.
O, if only I was that way again...
But my Kin changed my fate,
And used my compassion to give me this Taint.

They altered Love and made Lust,
Then told me of it to awaken my rage.
I was tricked to spill blood with mine own hand.
God learned of this, and he forsake my trust,
He neglected and forgot my young age...

So now you know the truth of your precious Angels.
What do you think of my enforced Banishment?
I gave my purity to seal away the Deadly Sins;
Did I deserve this dark prision as a Punishment?
All the while, They dance and show off their starry bangles...

Curse them....

-Lucifel Nosvarath
©2007-2010 ~fumetsu-kaji
:iconfumetsu-kaji:

Author's Comments

This is actually the third chapter to the 'Book of Darkness.' Again, really pissed when I wrote it.

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:iconlooshk:
Book of darkness eh? Who wrote it? and can I see more? I like your taste! ^_^

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Yaoi... Yaoi... Yaoi... Oh my God Yaoi...

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:iconfumetsu-kaji:
In order:

Yes, Book of Darkness.
I wrote it.
I'll put up more as I write.
Thanks for the review.

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I am not evil!!!
.... I'm just good impared.

Take a read.
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:iconlooshk:
Book of darkness, good title sounds biblical!
You're obviously a good writer!
I'll look forward to reading it and finally most welcome it was my pleasure! ;)

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Yaoi... Yaoi... Yaoi... Oh my God Yaoi...

[link]
:iconlina-chanthegreat:
Is "Powe" supposed to be power? Also "ou" should be you.

Do you want me to be your beta'r? XD

Very nice, it's always cool to read stuff that contradicts the norm. XD

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The pen is mightier than the sword.

#Zelda-OC-Club
:iconfumetsu-kaji:
Eh, it's not that I need a beta, but thanks for the offer. It's just that I get so into writing it down, I sometimes leave some letters out.

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I am not evil!!!
.... I'm just good impared.

Take a read.
[link]
:iconlina-chanthegreat:
Yeah, I know the feeling XD Sometimes I leave words out. Like one was something like this:

"Blah blah blah," someone, who description desc. descriiiiiiiibe.

I forgot to put said XD Or something to that effect at least. Especially when I get really into the Writing Zone, my hand kinda zooms across the page with no attention paid to the little stuff XD

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The pen is mightier than the sword.

#Zelda-OC-Club
:iconmutantlover09:
Hmm, this is what I have gathered from reading your poems.

A) You have some serious talent my friend.

B) I think you are slightly depressed. (Not that thats a bad thing mind you.)

I would have put a C but I forgot what I was going to write at the last second. Well I think you should put some of your stories on Fanfiction. I think they would go over great!

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Castiel: "He's not in Heaven. He has to be somewhere."

Dean: "Try in Mexico. I hear he's on a tortilla."

Castiel: "No... He's not on any flat bread." (Doesn't get the sarcasm)

Best Supernatural line ever!
:iconfumetsu-kaji:
Thanks for the review. The only problem is that I don't have the stuff to post on FF.Net.

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I am not evil!!!
.... I'm just good impared.

Take a read.
[link]
:iconmutantlover09:
Man, that sucks...for you I mean. 8D (I would put a emoticon but can't figure that out either.)

Just kidding, I'm not that heartless.

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Castiel: "He's not in Heaven. He has to be somewhere."

Dean: "Try in Mexico. I hear he's on a tortilla."

Castiel: "No... He's not on any flat bread." (Doesn't get the sarcasm)

Best Supernatural line ever!

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